Twitterative Design

Design 1: President-elect DONALD TRUMP will reshape U.S. politics

Good:  Concise and the name Donald Trump is bolded to catch the readers eye

Bad: Not specific enough and doesn’t contain frontloading.  Also is not as punchy as it could be.

Design 2: DONALD TRUMP wins presidency and will reshape U.S. politics

Good: Contains frontloading of Donald Trump in order to further capture audiences attention and has the word “win” which is more catchy to reader

Bad: The wording seems a little awkward

Design 3: DONALD TRUMP becomes 45th U.S. president: could reshape U.S. politics

Good: Removed awkward wording and replaced with a semicolon.  Very specific and “45th president” carries more weight than before.

Bad: It is a little long for a tweet

Design 4: DONALD TRUMP becomes 45th U.S. president: could reshape politics as we know it

Good: Very punchy by changing “could reshape politics” to “reshape politics as we know it”

Bad:  Still a bit long for a tweet

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